Today's Lesson - Afl and improving your work

In today's lesson you will be typing your Master And Commander work into word and making improvements as you go.


TASK 1 Instructions


1. Read these example question 1 answers
2. Read the advice on how to secure 10/10 on question 1

NOW DO THIS

3. Re-watch the sequence and re-write your answer into word


Task 2 Instructions


This question is where we ALL underperformed because of weaknesses in our written style. We need to 'flag up' our answers with key words


General advice -


Use the following words/phrases in order to show you are focused on the task


effects
used
audience
"this is a convention of the action adventure genre"
tension
spectacle
excitement
connotation
denotation
action code
cultural code

NOW DO THIS

1. Re-watch the sequence
2. Read this example response
3. Re-write your answer to QUESTION TWO into word
4. Every time you use one of the words/phrases from the list above put it in RED
5. Highlight all common and coordinating conjunctions in your work as you go.

Coordinating Conjunctions
and	but	or	yet	for	nor	so

Common Subordinating Conjunctions
after although as as if as long as as though because before even if even though	if if only in order that now that once rather than since so that than that	though till unless until when whenever where whereas wherever while